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EBF : The party [WIP01] by PtolemaiosLS EBF : The party [WIP01] by PtolemaiosLS
SKETCH

wow, so far this might be my most ambitious work, I'm not sure if I ever made such a complete composition before, I must say, I'm eager to know how this baby will look once finished.



Epic Battle fantasy franchise by :iconkupo707:

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critique in an early stage will be very helpful for the final product, if you spot something strange, please write some feedback.

-update- spent a few hours extra in the sketch of the BG

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:iconmiragician:
Nice to see you back in action.
Lots of details, I like that, but dude, you really need to work on your proportions and depth. I mean, we're seeing Matt from a bottom-up perspective, right, so why isn't this applying to Lance? And I can't really tell who's supposed to be in front or back with Natz, Lance, and Anna, plus Natalie looks like a pea compared to Matt even though she's supposed to be like a foot away from him. Try adjusting their body proportions or drawing them further apart for more clarity.
Also, I see you're trying to pull off that "boobs and butt" pose with Natalie there. The "boobs and butt" pose is a pretty common mistake among comic book artists, especially when they're trying to do fanservice and stuff. Most people wouldn't care, but trying to draw a character that way would require them to twist her spine to an impossible extent, making it anatomically impossible. That pose Natalie has there looks especially painful, I would heavily suggest you redraw it, preferably in a more natural position.
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Overall I'd say it's great.
however I agree with Miragician's critique that if we are looking at Matt whom has a worms view perspective it really does not apply to the other characters. The characters proportions would also be a problem here since Lance really just looks slightly smaller than the rest of the team or Anna and Natalie being really big.

Being it only a sketch I will put depth and positions of the characters aside for now.
Your choice of surroundings and the picture focus is understandable to make them the middle of attention.
I would like to see this finished soon.
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kittimitti Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really beautiful, but it's hard to see witch is witch..
loved nolegs!
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank ^^

hopefully with the inking and colors it would be easy to spot who is who.
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kittimitti Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it sure will.
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ShukoTsuzuki Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice job
makes me want to draw Matt again X3
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
do it!, drawing is healthy.

you can even submit it to :icontebf: once its done and might be featured in EBF4
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ShukoTsuzuki Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ sir yes sir
when I straighten out my life first sir
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
don't worry much about that, my life is all wonky and I'm still here xd.
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ShukoTsuzuki Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha but my life is going beyond the point of screwed rite now XD
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmmm..., you are 15, believe me when you are older you will know what actually mean being "screwed"
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ShukoTsuzuki Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Will look forward to it... XD
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