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however I agree with Miragician's critique that if we are looking at Matt whom has a worms view perspective it really does not apply to the other characters. The characters proportions would also be a problem here since Lance really just looks slightly smaller than the rest of the team or Anna and Natalie being really big.
Being it only a sketch I will put depth and positions of the characters aside for now.
Your choice of surroundings and the picture focus is understandable to make them the middle of attention.
I would like to see this finished soon.
Lots of details, I like that, but dude, you really need to work on your proportions and depth. I mean, we're seeing Matt from a bottom-up perspective, right, so why isn't this applying to Lance? And I can't really tell who's supposed to be in front or back with Natz, Lance, and Anna, plus Natalie looks like a pea compared to Matt even though she's supposed to be like a foot away from him. Try adjusting their body proportions or drawing them further apart for more clarity.
Also, I see you're trying to pull off that "boobs and butt" pose with Natalie there. The "boobs and butt" pose is a pretty common mistake among comic book artists, especially when they're trying to do fanservice and stuff. Most people wouldn't care, but trying to draw a character that way would require them to twist her spine to an impossible extent, making it anatomically impossible. That pose Natalie has there looks especially painful, I would heavily suggest you redraw it, preferably in a more natural position.
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