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Fixing Stuff 04 by PtolemaiosLS Fixing Stuff 04 by PtolemaiosLS
after a tons of critic, I got to improve proportions, inking style and a lot of stuff that most people didn't even notice, like for example Anna was missing her pigtails and stuff.

well, the changes might be too much to explain, but I also changed a bit of the inking on the monsters, only on the right side as well as some changes on the trees, but I didn't made a backup of the old monsters/BG layers so in the example of this dev, they are identical, also, the "before" also has some modifications to Natalie, you can check the difference in Natalie in here. ptolemaiosls.deviantart.com/ar…

in short I can say the most changes are on the characters, first Natalie, then Lance got huge modifications, Anna got some work as well as Matt, specially the faces of the characters, some proportions, work work work.
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sabrehawk90 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Can't wait to see the finished product! This is definitely improved!
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liguidicewolf Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
This might not be that big of a problem, but Lance's expression seems a bit weird to me. For some reason it reminds me a bit of the classic cat face (:3). And while it gives him a misteavious look, I would think he would have a more serious face or something like a cruel smirk. IDK, that is just a minor complaint. Other wise it is looking really good so far.

Two other things I just noticed. One, where is dark lance? I see all the other dark characters in there, but I am not seeing lance. Second, is there going to be something in the background there? in between the trees and behind the heroes. Perhaps the godcat mountain rising in the background with the golden-brick resort below?
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lance expression is fine I guess, is quite minor and I'm happy with it, Dark Lance is kinda cut out from the entire picture, he is right to dark anna, on the full version you will be able to see him.
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kittimitti Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it improved a lot!

Tho, there is one thing I'll have to point out.
I saw you made the slime near Lance's feet transparent(In a way)
But if you do it with one, then you'll have to do it with all, mostly talking about the beach-slime to Matt's right.
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Neelien Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Good job, it looks good. Good luck with it.

Just a small question.
Are you planning on making individual fingers for Anna and lance?
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gamerskullcrusher Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Everything is perfect *.* but shades better on everyone! Clothes have better texture. Now for colors.
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess not, I'm not that good at drawing fingers, I will try if I can.
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Neelien Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Neither am I. Hands are really difficult to draw.
I think that it's fine as it is, though, I was just wondering.

(also thanks for replying)
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